This question is no easier to answer than at the beginning of the term. I remember writing that style is not how something is simply written, but an active voice put to words in writing. I’m re-thinking that answer. Style can encompass a plethora of things. Not just applying a “voice” to writing. But applying techniques, such as the ones found in Williams Style: Toward Clarity and Grace that when applied right, can improve the style and clarity of writing, but when applied wrong, can lead to misunderstandings in written and even oral communication. The collaborative video that my group, Group 1 in the online portion, shows this so well. Even a person who is speaking with unclear and undefined language can cause so much miscommunication.
When I think of style now I also think of Ancient Rhetoric in correspondence with the YouTube commercials we had to do. Through this project I learned that many commercial script writers use the same styles the ancients used such as metaphor, “grand style”, and language that evoked emotion or question. I had to analyze the Tiger Woods commercial which was a perfect example of this type of Ancient style, being used to persuade an audience to “forgive” Tiger for his affair. I would think that after this class, style has a less definite meaning. In other words, I cannot describe it in one sentence as I’ve had in the first blog post. I can only think of several applications of style that are meant to persuade, clarify, and evoke emotion.
Yes, style can and does determine clarity. And depending on the writing, it can include a “voice”. But can also determine whether one laughs, cries, get’s angry, or it can lead to many interpretations of what’s written on paper or recorded in video.
Style encompasses everything. That’s the only way I can see to put it.